1) What has the comments others have posted on my blog taught me about my own writing?
Most of the comments want to write in concrete for me. (more specific and more detailed.) Futhermore theytaughtmy mistakes ofgrammar. I read those comments, then I realize the lack of writing skills in my posting. Therefore, I can be able to write better than before thanks to those comments.
2) What have the comments I have posted on other blogs taught me about writing?
I often taught grammatical errors to other blogger. They didn't know about the error, and they just made a mistake. In addition, I frequently expressed approval about their posting. While I read their writing, I study about writing skills.
Jeju
Island is one of the representative tourist attractions in South Korea. Arccoding to the book 'Bus Travel In Jeju', it mentions that Jeju Island is the most popular place to travel. There
are many beaches and our country’s representative Mountain of Halla. Beaches of
Jeju are the color of emeralds. In addition, the seawater are clean and
transparent. Also, there are many delicious foods in Jeju. A great
number of sightseers visit Jeju Island all year around. Jeju Island is always
good to travel, but most people say that Jeju Island's summer is the most fantastic
tourist spot. I think that summer of Jeju is good for three reasons.
The
source of picture : My Friend “Jeongyoon”
First
of all, sea is more clear during the summer. Most of the sea changes color
every season. Jeju is blustery at all times. Above all,
Jeju’s winter is very windy among others. In winter, seawater is too dark. Seawater
of summer, on the other hands, is clear and clean. Accordingly, we can see
inside of the sea. It is amazing how the seawater looks different each seasons.
The source of picture : Innisfree's homepage
Furthermore,
there are many trees and flowers in Jeju, so Jeju has many botanical gardens. (like
Yeomiji Botanical
Garden, Hallim Park) Botanical garden is good to visit especially in summer, because trees are in leaf. Therefore, botanical garden in summerhas
a
mass
of
customers.
The
source of picture : My Friend “Jeongyoon”
Lastly,
Jeju has many delicious foods in summer. Like the cold raw fish soup, wheat
noodles and traditional chicken soup. Besides, there are many kinds of ice
flakes with syrup. Most of the food is delicious to eat cold, so hot summer is better than cold winter.
The
source of picture : My Friend “Jeongyoon”
In
summary, Jeju Island is an attractive tourist spot in summer. In this post, I limited that season is summer, but Jeju is always a fantastic place to travel. There are something different for each season, so I want to enjoy all the seasons in Jeju. If you read this post, I hope you go to Jeju Island.
