Jeju Island Is A
Fantastic Tourist Attraction
To Travel In
Summer
Jeju
Island is one of the representative tourist attractions in South Korea. Arccoding to the book 'Bus Travel In Jeju', it mentions that Jeju Island is the most popular place to travel. There
are many beaches and our country’s representative Mountain of Halla. Beaches of
Jeju are the color of emeralds. In addition, the seawater are clean and
transparent. Also, there are many delicious foods in Jeju. A great
number of sightseers visit Jeju Island all year around. Jeju Island is always
good to travel, but most people say that Jeju Island's summer is the most fantastic
tourist spot. I think that summer of Jeju is good for three reasons.
The
source of picture : My Friend “Jeongyoon”
First
of all, sea is more clear during the summer. Most of the sea changes color
every season. Jeju is blustery at all times. Above all,
Jeju’s winter is very windy among others. In winter, seawater is too dark. Seawater
of summer, on the other hands, is clear and clean. Accordingly, we can see
inside of the sea. It is amazing how the seawater looks different each seasons.
The source of picture : Innisfree's homepage
Furthermore,
there are many trees and flowers in Jeju, so Jeju has many botanical gardens. (like
Yeomiji Botanical
Garden, Hallim Park) Botanical garden is good to visit especially in summer, because trees are in leaf. Therefore, botanical garden in summer has
a
mass
of
customers.
The
source of picture : My Friend “Jeongyoon”
Lastly,
Jeju has many delicious foods in summer. Like the cold raw fish soup, wheat
noodles and traditional chicken soup. Besides, there are many kinds of ice
flakes with syrup. Most of the food is delicious to eat cold, so hot summer is better than cold winter.
The
source of picture : My Friend “Jeongyoon”
In
summary, Jeju Island is an attractive tourist spot in summer. In this post, I limited that season is summer, but Jeju is always a fantastic place to travel. There are something different for each season, so I want to enjoy all the seasons in Jeju. If you read this post, I hope you go to Jeju Island.
I refer to the book ; 'Bus Travel in Jeju'
Hi Woori,
답글삭제Nice reading your paragraph. I was craving for a trip to Jeju Island and finally decided to go there next year! I hope I can eat a tall hamburger there. Back to your paragraph, it will be better to state the example for each of the reason you have stated above. Also, the sentence in line 4 saying,”Jeju Island always good,” should be changed into,”Jeju Island is always good”. It will be interesting to write more information about Jeju but overall your writing is good! Keep it up! =)
Best wishes♡,
Minji
Hi Woori,
답글삭제I completely agree with your post. Jeju Island is awesome place to travel. I have been to Jeju Island three times. I think you didn’t finish your post, so I will recommend you two things in Jeju Island. First, I think Jeju Island has so many beautiful sights, but I think the greatest scene is Cheonjiyeon Falls. How about write about Cheonjiyeon Falls? Second, I think the best things to eat in Jeju lsland is Jeju Black Pig. I highly recommend you to write this. This pig is very delicious that I couldn’t put into words.
Also, I think you missed the verb in line four "Jeju Island always good".
Have a good day!
Youngjae
Dear woori,
답글삭제I feel empathy your post. I think Jeju Island is great place for visitor. I have been to Jeju twice. I want to eat chocolate which made of Jeju's tangerine. It is really delicious. Back to your paragraph, I think you should give several example for each of the reason. Also, the sentence in line 4 saying"Jeju Island always good", should be changed.
Have a nice weekend!
Inyoung.
Woori,
답글삭제Most of people think Jeju Island is beautiful. In Summer, there are the emerald color sea and the wild animals like deer and squirrel. Summer Jeju Island is fantastic, but I think winter is best. Because I went Jeju Island in last winter, it was very wonderful. I went Hallasan mountain. It was very hard to me, but the top of Hallasan is the most beautiful place I have seen.
I think your post is good. However if it was more detailed and it has more reasons why Jeju Island is fantastic place, the post will be better. ;) ;p XD
Thanks to read and have a nice day
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Sora